Today is Daddy’s birthday
He went out to work early
So that we can have the afternoon together
The children and I read The Lost Words at breakfast
Today we read the spell, adder
We decided to use this poem
As a model for writing a poem about Daddy
We talked about simile and metaphor
As we brainstormed ideas
For describing the different qualities of Daddy
The poem is an acrostic
And each letter starts the description of a different quality
Or characteristic
Here is the original adder spell
And here is our poem for Daddy
daddy
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daddyDark chocolate eyes, strong orangutan arms, friendly face, as handsome as a stag
For daddy is as daddy looksAgile, athletic, strong as an elephant, fast as a cheetah, sometimes sloth slow, statue still
For daddy is as daddy movesDeep as a cavern, woolly jumper warm, full of adventure and funny jokes, brave as a warrior, magical storyteller
For daddy is as daddy soundsDaddyish, safe, smoke and fire, just like home
For daddy is as daddy smellsYou are our squeezebox, our cuddliest teddy bear, sandpaper rough, strong and tough, yet soft as marshmallows, a tickly mouse.
For daddy is as daddy feelsWritten on your birthday
By Esther, William and Bea (with squidgy kisses from Edie and thoughts of Baby Tilda)
Inspired by adder from The Lost Words
We are loving the poems in The Lost Words
We are loving using them to inspire our own writing
We are going to be doing some art work linked to the book too
And cannot wait to share it with you
For now though
Happy Birthday Daddy
We hope you like your poem
I really love your poetry over breakfast and the poems the children have created are really good! Well done them!
Happy birthday to your husband. Hope you have a wonderful afternoon together.
Also hope you had a wonderful holiday. xx